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for Feeling the Heat

by lexjamandme

person Anon
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, how do you do it? How do you write such beautiful stories time and time again? I loved this! Totally loved it. Sure it had me crying at times..especially in the beginning to middle ways..but then i was crying because it's just so intense. The feelings these two have for each other..their love..is so intense, i can feel it with every word that i read. They say everyone has a special talent and i'm not sure what mine is, but i sure know what your talent is. Please...PLEASE, don't ever stop writing.
person roro237
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot in more ways than one. ok dumb wise crack:) Seriouly a work of art. I enjoyed ^_^ PS it was hot!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i didn't know there was a NaruSasu day! >.< Well, even if this was late, that was an AWESOME celebration for it! I love how hot you kept it, even with the scenes of how their relationship grew breaking up the sex scene intermittently. It actually seemed to make it more hot, drawing it out as such... and I really love how you built things between them, so it wasn't just PWP. This is a WHOLE STORY you have here! Also, normally I find Sasuke calling Naruto "angel" annoying, but in THIS context..gahh, it was just so sweet and perfect. I love how you used it. I loved how Sasuke really thought he was an angel, even getting upset the angel hadn't taken him away... gahh, that part was heartbreaking. The range of emotion in this was detailed so well. kudos. I feel like my review is all over the place lol, but this story was just so amazing. Thanks so much for writing it!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written..the flashback scenes were well executed. I loved this!!!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was one of those ficlettes that just grabs your heartstrings and tugs continuously. I absolutely loved every nuance of this and I totally absolve you of any and all guilt you may have felt in being a few days late for NaruSasu day.
person akinohanun
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is sooo good and well written

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