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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first story huh? damn good for a first story. after this twoshot (? haha) i hope you continue writing. your style is nice and i didn't see much wrong with grammer and spelling. once or twice the wording was a tad awkward, but overall, i liked it. good job! ^--^ ::heart::
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, pushy uke shota Sasuke is a sex kitten! He sounded so needy though; must be so lonely for him, so hopefully Kakashi will give him some sexual healing XD
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice :) I like the daring Sasuke!