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schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I was laughing in the end, reading about the agreement between the clans. Ihope you update soon, for once again I am hooked on your writing and to tell the truth, I just love your OC, she seems so interesting, great job. (lucky bugger that Shino). I do hope we get a plot too, for this chapter seemed to be more comic relief, but who knows, maybe the plot had already started ... Update!!
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1

It never fails to amaze me how much you keep everyone in character! Shikamaru is so lazy that he definitely would let someone hunt his deer instead of doing it himself and Paige will need plenty animals to practise the old ways she's being taught. Reading this and 'Reading Totems' takes me back to Year 9 (8th Grade) History when my class covered a little of the history and culture of the native peoples of North America - but this is far more captivating than any school lesson.

Thank you for writing and publishing such fabulous stories to share with the world.
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh so cool!!!

how cute!! i love the fact that she's trying to learn the old ways! back then not much was wasted and they USED EVERYTHING!!!

anyways, great interlude!

laters! ~_^
miko
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schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So you two are going to do a collabo after all!!!! YAY! Now I will have to seriously annoy Casa until he updates. I mean, he teases me with the faintest glimmer of Gaara goodness and then nothing...Yay for a sequel! I'm glad to see Paige and Shino again...I'm interested to know how you and Casa will bring the two stories together in the collaboration...And thanks for the email about the post!

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