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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it I NEED MORE PLEASE *puppydog eyes staring at screen*
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm someone wrote a second chapter instead of doing homework lol. well it was time well spent (but you know homework is way more important) :). i enjoyed this chapter.
i like how the story is going so far. the mix of comedy and tragedy should be ok i guess. from what i gather, i sort of sense history between kyuubi and itachi, not sure if it gonna be that way.
i like how the story is going so far. the mix of comedy and tragedy should be ok i guess. from what i gather, i sort of sense history between kyuubi and itachi, not sure if it gonna be that way.
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Just the worse timing for naruto and sasuke to have your mafia brothers to turn up.
I think you should make it comedy, theres not enough comedy and I could do with a laugh.
I look forward to the next update
I think you should make it comedy, theres not enough comedy and I could do with a laugh.
I look forward to the next update
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great first chapter. I loved naruto's reaction after the kiss.
I look forward to the next chapter
I look forward to the next chapter
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes I definitely like your version better. Lol.
Update soon!
Update soon!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a joy to read. i really needed something to make me laugh.
"This isn't Baywatch bitch walk faster" hahaha omg that was so funny Naru is so impatient. I can so see him screaming out "You rapist! You pedophile!"hahahahaha
I'm liking the group members on both sides. It's nice that you put Sai in there.
"This isn't Baywatch bitch walk faster" hahaha omg that was so funny Naru is so impatient. I can so see him screaming out "You rapist! You pedophile!"hahahahaha
I'm liking the group members on both sides. It's nice that you put Sai in there.