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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha
P could not laughing at Sakura in this chapter. It was hot and all but think what Sakura face look like just made me laugh.
P could not laughing at Sakura in this chapter. It was hot and all but think what Sakura face look like just made me laugh.
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic plot and characterisation and brilliant writing. You are an amazing writer.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the plot is good, and i really think this fic is interesting, i cant wait for a little development between gaara and sakura,
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not to bad. I didnt find any thing wrong with it at lest.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pfft...It's a great fic. Don't worry about the mistakes. I can't wait to read more. ^^
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This first chapter is very interesting and enjoyable. The grammar looks fine, I couldn't tell that it had been translated - in fact the chapter has far better grammar then I have seen from many native English speakers.