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I really like where this is going and I do hope that maybe you choose to continue.

It definitely picqued(SP?) my interest! I'm a little afraid of the torture, but ten times more interested in the way they'll end up in a threeway relationship with Shika and Shino! So as far as I go, I really want to see where we go from here!
Thanks for the test run!

I think this is the begining to a great fic, that should definatly be continued. I would love to see where you go with it and what happens to Naruto. I know you probably have a busy life so I'll be nice and only post on here monthly to remined you that an update would be absalutly loved.

thisis great pleasekeepit up..ohanddid merging with the ninetails fox change Naruto much?

That's a good beginning, so where's the next installment? You can't mean to leave it there like that, can you?

I really like this story it has great structure and potential. I look forward to reading the new chapters. :3

i will be waiting and i think some others will be too

wooo good opening, as always I eagerly await your next update, your stuff is always good to me so no bad PR here. ^^

goddamn fucking cliffhangers FIRST chapters when i want to read more! *fumes*

i can't believe there is just one available chapter! where IS the rest?! where! i want it! >.<

*cries*

as usual from you, great plot and great, great, great flow. *_* was so caught in it (and the promise of the pairing, too, cant forget) that i didn't notice there was just ONE chapter. grrrr. i want more! i want to know what orochimaru will do to naruto! and how he'll go back to konoha!

(and i am sure that some of his friends noticed his acting but decided not to call him on it. they're not all blind to him and his motives... and yet, it's nice to see that you're not jumping into blinding friendships without reasoning behind).
also. you're not having naruto go and babble evilly about iruka not remembering of him just because. you're actually explaining that he's got tons of things to think about and his disappearance won't be noted until it's too late -making sense whilst explaining it. others (not as good) authors would have had naruto go into an angst, emo speech on how no one loves him and such. :)

as usual, as expected from you :) another fic i want to follow. gimme more chapters! well, of course, only if you can. :P not forcing you. just... trying to bribe you? :D

:D Cepheus :D

Awful place to leave it! lol...makes me wonder what they're going to do to poor Naruto!