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aww I like it, make's me all warm and fizzy inside =3 I hope you up date soon.

hhmm this is gonna b different but i lik it so far keep going

This is an adorable story. I really like the idea of Sasuke being a single father and being so possessive over him. I also thought this wasn't so bad for a first fic. I'm not a great writer but I saw no problems and it all sounded good to me. Update soon please!!!!!!!

ok... mmm... where to begin? first: I like the idea and I don't mind the "incest" but right now I'm thinking that Sasuke has around 25 and then when Naruto growns up it's not only gonna be incest but kinda shouta too... again I don't mind -that much- but I think if you made him go to school (university at least) the age difference will be shorter.
and forget about occ's... I think you are missing here something like "human-natural-reactions" what do I mean? well I think that someone would hardly accept a baby just like that... not that I don't believe someone would fall in love with a baby like that, but I think that if Sasuke tries to find the mother would be more credible (maybe he is... and I'm thinking ahead)
don't mind me that much, I liked the story and I'll be waiting for more... even when there are some details I really liked your style
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i am looking forward to read the next chapter if the story.

I read your story on FF I am so happy your brought it here. I can't get over how funny and adorable it is. I hope you are able to finish it with a lot of chapter. Thank you for bringing it to AFF.