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hello there author here. i just wanted to let you all knoe that i am going to be taking a break from this fanfic. i needto work on one that is already completed in writing. i just need to concentrate on getting it on the computer. it is another fan fic called A Jewel's Light; A Girl's Wish. as stated before, it is already done on paper, i just have to get i typed up. i shouldn't take me too long. well thankyou for reading the story thus far and i will be sure to get back to it as soon as i can.

interesting

i guess they felt it nessessary to show Aranee what it is like to be loved. since he's never felt it before and the only thing he knows is sex that was the only way to show him. they will be finding another way later on so don't worry it is only temporary. and i believe i will be keeping kakashi and iruka together. i hope this has help answer that.

Like the story but, who are the pairings?

i gues the parings would be Aranee and who ever he wants to be with. there is mention of Iruka and Kakashi. i may do a sceene with just the two of them with Aranee watching but i don't know, it is still up in the air. if you would like me to do a paring just let me know which and i may puit in. i am open to all yaoi parings. only yaoi because those are the only ones i am really good at. don't ask.

How did Iruka and Kakashi go from being Aranee's protectors to his lovers? I know a year past but still, you didn't show any development whatsoever. There's no connection.
And wouldn't Iruka have qualms about bedding someone who is now his student? Obviously this is AU but I would imagine Iruka still abiding by his rule system, whatever that is.
Just saying. This isn't a flame, just constructive criticism.