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oh wow this is such a great story. i am so glad that you have decided to continue it and add a plot to it in the process. as much as i don't want this story to end in the next chapter or two, can't wait to see what happens next. on that note, if possible, can you email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you do update so that i won't miss it. many please and thank yous, with a plate full of cybercookies as a bribe (wait, did i just say bribe, i meant for being the bestest authoress ever!)

ps.. although i do really love this story, and i really really hope you don't take offense, because i only add this little bit because i do love this story so much, and now i am just babbling, but there is this one minor little detail that has been bugging me and that is that throughout this story, instead of using the word 'sat' as in 'so-and-so sad somewhere,' you have been using the word 'set'. i know that it is only a one letter difference, but it is a difference. and if you want, i'll even help you go back and fix them all. know that like i said, i only say this because i love this story and hopefully you don't take any offense to me making these corrections. and now that i have babbled all that, i gotta go hide in my closet from the authoress... -hides-

I love this story :D

2 more chapters remaining? I hope you do a sequel!

Can't wait, update soon!

Very nice. I am very much liking the new detective angle you've started. And if Kabuto's molesting little kids, he needs to get caught, of course. Anxious to see just what our dastardly duo get up to so that we have our evidence. Nicely done, once again.

The story about the kid that neutralized the cops is pretty amusing. I like it that you used it in your story !! Again good work ^^

Happy birthday a little late ^^ It must have been a shock when Sasuke knew who was Konan. Itachi must be bi ^^ Poor Sasuke. His father was cruel and Sai should receive a beating for the drawings !!! Good chapter ^^

OMG!!! I loved it. Sasuke is so... god hes just so perfect I can't stop gushing over him. I like Sasuke in this, how he struggles with his family and his own inhibitions. He is finally coming into his own and you write it beautifully. Everytime I read this I fall into it more and more. Its just so realistic to me. I can see this happening. I love how you can see the change occuring in Sasuke in slow increments, the way it should be. Naruto is also fantastic. He has his hero complex but hes also just Naruto and he fits well into this story. I think its wonderful how you've graduated the both of them into knowing that they want each other and being willing to go for it in subtle ways that people really use to get what they want when they don't want to just come out and say it. Your characters are so real. I know english isn't your first language, but I just wanted to mention that the errors in some places sort of ruin the groove one gets going when reading these stories. It doesn't completely distract from the story but it does cause little hiccups that take your attention away from the story. Other than that this chapter was perfect. I love how it moved the storyline forward even though not that much happened really. Anyway, I'll quit gushing and just say I look forward to the next chapter immensely.

so mean...a cliff-hanger;P

enjoyable as always.
thank you for your lovely writing.

At least, Sasuke accepted his feelings and don't fight his attraction for Naruto anymore. I can't wait for the next chapter and see who is at the door ^^ Good work ^^

what?!!!

only two chapters-tops-left!
surely u cant finish it and sort out all the problems in two chapters?
i want moooore. so much more naru/sasu gooodness.

this story is really good. and i know your chapters are really long and take forever, and i dont want to ask for too much but....
please update soon!!

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*

I really like this story. So continue to write " stress free " and I feel like it will always be good. Good work ^^