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*squeal* OMG!! I love your story! The portrayal of the Uchiha problem is so good! You are awesome! Kudos!! Kudos!! I cant wait to read more!! OMG!! *faints*

awesome story!!
Naruto sure showed Sasuke.
i can't wait for your next update!!!

GO NARUTO MAKE SASUKE PAY!!!!!!!!!! POOR SASUKE BUT HE DESERVES IT ALL!!!! MWAHAHAHAHA

I knew it was more than jus chance that Ryuu looked lik Sasuke...and now Sasuke learns a bitter lesson of revenge...keep goin i want 2 read more on this story...

i love your naruto character and i think this is the best use of MPreg/"sasuke left me pregnant" story-line I've seen. Really-- it gives Naruto a whole new look, and a much more human one!

Congrats! I can't wait to read more

Oh jeez. This is good. Naruto got knocked up, huh?

*waits to see if she's right*

Oh wow! I am thinking that Naruto was pregnant when Sasuke left so, the whole wedding and mother dying during childbirth was just to cover up for that fact. Maybe the woman was paid off or something like that. Anyway just speculation, but if its true I wonder how long it will take for Sasuke to realize it. And god you can tell they are Uchiha's they are both arrogant with Ryuu being the lesser of the two. Definitely interesting, looking forward to the next chapter!

okay. I loved this. This was great. I grinned through the whole thing. Please keep this up!

I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!! I was rooting for Naruto and his son I love it so much I readed it FOUR TIMES I love it I hope you update soon pls thank you!

Yo, I tried to leave a review at TONFA, but apparently only registered users have such an ability :P

Ah, so Naruto DID have Sasuke's kid after all. That means his entire marriage was just a farce right? Heh, was Ryuu really so sheltered or is his existence know to any (or perhaps all?) of the Rookies?

I'm already liking the dynamics between Ryuu (good name by the way. Simple, but awesome) and Okibi (We all know Ryuu means dragon, but what does Okibi mean?). This chapter shows that Sasuke fostered the need of a rivalry into Okibi concerning Ryuu, perhaps to justify his decision, but did Naruto do the same with his son as well? You said in your summary that both will find out the hard way, but I'd rather not see Naruto go down that road as well :(

In any case I can't wait to see where this budding rivalry goes (especially since it seems that Ryu knows the truth) since I can't help thinking about Itachi and Sasuke's "sibling rivalry". Who won that little sparing match by the way?

I like how we get to see Sasuke's parenting and relationship with his son in this chapter. I know that he loves his son, but he seems to be keeping an emotional distance from him. Okibi seems like he'll do anything to win his father's approval... this might prove ugly in the future. I'm eager to see how Naruto wears the mantel of fatherhood next.

Hope to see an update soon.