rate_review Reviews

The repression is so cute, it's sad. It nice to see them hold back. Adds to the UST that Original sin started out with. These informative drabbles are like looking into a window of the past. It gives the story a deeper feel..you know? I like them lots and lots ^_^ It would be interesting to see the first wet dream either of them had about the other.

Oh!...If I hadn't already read Original Sin(cough,more than once,cough)this piece would have make me cry angsty tears of despair for poor Naru-chan.But as I already did the first lecture this is like tasting the desert before the diner^^^.So very nice chapters,and if I may ask you a request, would you mind adding some chapters from Minato's point of view?
have a nice summer(well,theres not much summer left to enjoy,but anyways^^)
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