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for Becoming a Slave

by zanax

person Kari
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sucks to be Sasuke.
His pride is being flushed down the drainnn~.
D:
*Pets the poor Sasu-chan*

Keep up the good (And hot *nosebleed*) work. ;D

-Kari
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I LOVE NARUTO IN THIS FIC AS DOM THAT IS SO DAMN HOT AND SASUKE AS SUB/UKE IS IN MY TOP 10 AS THE FUCKING HOSTEST SHIT IN THE WORLD. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE. GREAT JOB. CAN YOU TELL THAT I LOVE YOUR FIC.^_^
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello, it's hakai here. I thank you very much for offering your help to beta Take Me With You,but I have two betas already for that fic, (I searched for a beta on yaoi gallery before submitting and they offered their help.)

it makes me a bit worried that you offered to beta it, since it was already betaed, LOL, but I hope it wasn't so bad.
I would offer you to beta one of my other stories, (I lost my long time beta yesterday), but 1st: I don't know if you'd like it, 2nd, I still don't know if I'll remain on aff or leave, so it would be mean to make you work on stuff I wouldn't post on the site anymore.

thank you for your review anyway.
person nm1716
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE FEED AGAIN SOON!!!
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!! What does Naruto have against Sasuke 'his' exDOM??? He is totally getting him back for something. Damn! This story is so good. With every lash Sasuke got, I whimpered as well.:( Please update soon, MISTRESS.XD
person Nova
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really missed Hestia, and I think you're going to become my new addiction. Chocolate cookies to you!!!
person BD
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yess!
Sasuke should moan like the bitch he is when he's getting spanked infront of everyone.
Love the story.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic. It is so hard to find good BDSM themed SasuNaru fics.

I really love this and thanks for writing it... please update soon.

-Akiru-
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohh! let the games Begin. XD
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I will never understand the joy people get out of D/s but damnit if this story isn't friggen hot. ^^

Keep up the good work.

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