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hey there! do i sense a love triangle in the making with gaara? hmmm..anyway, this chapter foreshadowed a lot of things, especially with naruto's reason for being and wanting to be with sasuke. can't wait to read more! thanks!

you never wanna have fun with grown ups unless they tell you what they wanna do(i dunno climb to the top of buildings and spit loogies on peoples heads er somethin)kids,or little boys are fun all they wanna do is fight, little girls well...they ask too many questions their too smart to play with.one good thing about little kids is that when the wanna fight they use all their strength.wonder if sasuke will get home before naruto and what his reaction will be if he finds him not there,will gaara even let him go?hope you can update soon

Oooooh!!!! Good sequence with the Sand sibs. How could I forget about Gaara? Now we'll be in for some real angsting on Sasuke's part when he finally realizes he wants Naruto. Then we'll see an all out war between the two (or more) SEXY Semes!!!!!!!!

he thinks real hard after that one kiss.why doesnt narutos voice work?(im sure someone else alresdy asked).whats with itachi,do they really share prostoitutes?hope you can update soon

So, Sasuke's a Player with lots of one night stands? Bad boy Sasuke. Too bad Itachi.

This is going to be such a fun story. I love Sasuke getting a nosebleed. Will there be others in this fic to possibly come between the two while Sasuke's angsting?

Ooooh! I wish there was some fan art of Naruto and his black wings. I wish I could draw. I hope Naruto doesn't get into any trouble on the way home.

Hi! i totally laughed out loud in the third chapter! it was so funny and naruto was just so adorable. sasuke was also cute, especially with how he treated naruto sweetly but not obviously so. the kiss was a nice touch. it set the ball rolling for changes in their relationship. The fourth chapter was hot, what with sasuke fantasizing over naruto! now sasuke can no longer live in denial land. his teasing bro was also a nice touch, even if he does live to annoy the hell out of sasuke. it was quite funny how he got caught but was not flustered. really good. thanks for the update! :)

It is interesting so far. I am looking forward to reading more of this and seeing how the plot develops. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

I have no problem with short chapters - most of mine end up that way. I'm more of a 'quality than quantity' person.

My email is amandababy3@yahoo.com. You could email me your chapter and I'll go over it or something like that if you want. Whatever, up to you.