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by sameyler

schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see why Sasuke was worried about his mother being with Naruto. At first, I was like why is Sasuke so uptight about his mom, but dag. This is not at all what I expected her to dress him as. I was thinking an Angel. I can't wait for the next update. This is going to be so funny!!!!! Oooooh!!! Gaara's going to claim Naruto as his and the fight will be ON!!!!!!XD
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh!!!! This is going to be so good. Is Mikoto going to dress Naruto in well, I'll just wait and see. Is Gaara going to be there???? Who else is in the fic???? So many questions I can't wait to read your next update!!!!!!!
person hisoka
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it would be different if it were sasukes father who found naruto insted of his mother,he shouldnt think badly of his mothers judgement though in the same breath anyone would.hope you can update soon
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, Naruto blushing is so adorable. I'm so glad Naruto might be able to talk so he can tell Sasuke how much he loves him.
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yesssss!!! Angry, protective Sasuke is 'THE BEST'!!! Now the ball is rolling.
person hisoka
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its always nice to find someone willling to protect you because they care...i just imagined myself as an obeise women,sitting on people would be so effective.so now do we find out why naruto cant talk?hope you can update soon
person Lilia
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Is Gaara going to try and rape Naruto? Is Sasuke going to want him? Will Naruto ever speak again? AND WHAT HAPPENED IN HEAVEN?!?!?!?!?!
Lilia, the uke rapist.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited!!!!!! I love when Sasuke and Gaara are up against eachother. Will Naruto start to like Gaara for a while and have to decide who he really likes? or well I'll just wait to see what happend.XD
person sonykit
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there! are you doing better already? i'm really sorry about what's up with your boyfriend and bestfriend. you may hurt now, but keep in mind, you'll get over it given time. :) anyway, this chapter really set the pace going with the sasuke-gaara rivalry. i like how sasuke was really worried but was hesitant to show it. i found the situation with gaara interesting, so possessive and sure to give sasuke a big competition. i just hope he doesn't get too violent. hope sasuke gets naruto back in his arms real soon! thanks for the update! :)
person hisoka
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha,condoms full of milk wonder if thats illegal.so whats he gonna do, is he actually gonna call itachi from like a pay phone or something(do they even have payphones anymore?) gaara became possesive fast even before actually conversing(wonder if you could call saying 'thank you' through writing conversing)with the object of his offections(can you even say that?).well hope you can update soon so wanna findout sasuke and gaaras reaction to each other especially gaaras after narutos affection towards sasuke.

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