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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very enjoyable chapter, i look forward to the next one, the beginning seemed abrupt and hurried but still enjoyable
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor, poor Hinata-chan. what is she going to do!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was it just me, or was that last chapter..... highly intellegent. *bows to Jelp* you are a god/goddess amongst us fan fic writers, please make the next chapter just as epic
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yo, at first when reading this I thought that it was goin to be a few quick fantasy chapters.
but i've gotta give it to ya, its turning into quite a good story. nice job
but i've gotta give it to ya, its turning into quite a good story. nice job
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha...Yay! Will Hinata eventually tell Naruto, or is she going to hide it? hmm. Can't wait to find out ^^
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens!!
I love this fic.
I love this fic.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooo this is such a cliffy!!! XD heheheeheh!!!!! i love it!
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October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! I have never come across such a plot with these two characters before. Awesome!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Oh shit!!! (Cue excitemenet!!! +^^+ hehehehehehee)
oh man oh man oh man.. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! EEEeeeee!!!! ehehheheheheheheheh
Keep up the excellent work!
oh man oh man oh man.. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! EEEeeeee!!!! ehehheheheheheheheh
Keep up the excellent work!