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for Desperation

by Jelp

person Edo EroSennin
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looks good, hopefully the next chapters will be a bit longer, but the story is ok, quite amusing, can't wait for more =D
person vic
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this looks really funnny. i cannot wait to see what happends
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Wow, poor Hinata. I always kind of expected this outcome whenever I read fics about Naruto getting serious with other kunoichi, but Ino? That's sort of far-fetched, isn't it? I hope you explain that a little more in the next chapters.

I was slightly dissapointed by how short this chapter was, but the writing is pretty good and the story seems to flow nicely. I'll be waiting to read (and review) as soon as you update. Don't take too long!

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