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for Desperation

by Jelp

person anubite
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Increible!

Excellent work, dood. Seriously, the set up is good (believable), the sex awesome, and I so hope you'll write more.
person DeAndrea
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg please update soon
person Saraneko
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to find out what happens now that Hinata had her way ^^
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha... Naruto might be a little dense... although waking up the following morning naked with scratch marks may be a hell of a clue!

Keep up the good work. ^^
person mike
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man that was really good. i cant even imagine how she's gonna get in pants but ur gonna tell us, right?
person Saraneko
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter >< Hina/Naru is my second fav pairing after Tema/Shika ^^ And it's so nice to see Hinata actually taking control of a situation!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting is this going to be a long series? I like the first chapter are you planning on continuing?
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start and I'm interested were this going. Hopefully this will be not to long and have some unique events plus a happy ending? So lets and have fun in it.
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
person videogameguy10
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a good story in the making. Please keep it up.

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