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September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was god, but I'd love to read more of it.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're first lemon was really well written,
and inexplicably hot. My goodnes. Awesome job with this, really.
and inexplicably hot. My goodnes. Awesome job with this, really.
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best NaruSasu's ive ever read. it was descriptive, and although there were a few errors here and there they were minimal. great, great job.
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read several of your stories. Most I've just just rated 5 stars_but I noticed the authors note at the end of this one, stating that it was your first NaruSasu lemon. So I thought it deserved a few words: WOW, GREAT, YUMMY, YEAH, HOT, etc...I've enjoyed reading your stories. You're a good story teller. They have some fun in them. They also have some tenderness. Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn!! O_O
Now on to story #2...
Now on to story #2...
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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I'm surprised this doesn't have more reviews. Some people are lazy, I guess. Either way, this was well written, smoking hot, and had a good mix of plot and smex. I liked how you softened the carnal aspect with the romance. Sweet and Sexy! Best combination ever.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was an awsome lemon... I thought so before I saw that it was your first one. And trust me, I'm picky about my lemons... okay that sounds really odd. Sorry. Anyway. I loved it and a sequal would be really nice. I think perhaps they need to have a very large argument that ends in sex. But then again... that's just me (perv that I am.) sorry for barging into your story. But trust me, it's a compliment
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I might suggest changing your summary of the story from sasu-naru-sasu, to just narusasu, as I assumed Sasuke would be topping in this story from that since that is what it implies.
Overall great writing, it's good... I am just not a huge fan of naruto topping, I normally read stories that either have sasuke topping or the two of them switching.
Overall great writing, it's good... I am just not a huge fan of naruto topping, I normally read stories that either have sasuke topping or the two of them switching.