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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry man, but the fact that she was with Kiba just ruined it for me.
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are such a hot couple. I can't wait to read the next one.
Rox
Rox
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Short, but Still pretty sweet. I wonder why Hinata is avoiding him when yi comes to the mushy stuff, though? you'd think she'd be celebrating that kind of stuff.
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Next chapter! Quickly!!!!
Next chapter! Quickly!!!!
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's really good, but I really hatethe involvment of Kiba, it just makes me sick to think that he has even laid a hand on our sweet Hinata-chan.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!
I totally thought that this would end up a one-shot. Imagine my surprise when I found out there was an update. I believe my thought was "Oh, she meant EIGHT ways..."
Keep it up. I'm really liking this one, especially how you expressed awkwardness in this particular chapter.
Happy writings ^_^
I totally thought that this would end up a one-shot. Imagine my surprise when I found out there was an update. I believe my thought was "Oh, she meant EIGHT ways..."
Keep it up. I'm really liking this one, especially how you expressed awkwardness in this particular chapter.
Happy writings ^_^
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Drools.... SIX MORE! Slurp can't wait. I can't wait when we find out if anybody saw anything... (I hope) gotta love girl gossip.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know that in the first chapter you mention that naruto removed hinata's tank top then you go back and mention that it was bunched up above her breasts? maybe you should fix that? other than that it was good.
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww Hinata.. YOu have to officially claim him!!!! Do it!!! Otherwise insecurity is going to eat that boy up from the inside out. >:P
Hehe.. keep up the good work. ^^
Hehe.. keep up the good work. ^^
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You got a good story going here. I kind of like that Hinata hasn't come right out and told Naruto her feelings, and that he's unsure what her feelings are for him. The only "complaint" I got is you wrote that Hinata had slept with Kiba. She still wanted and loved Naruto, but slept with the "dog"? It doesn't make sense, nor is it that believable, because her character isn't like that. You could have written they were really close friends, and people had thought something happened between them but nothing did. Naruto could have been one of those people and still be questioning their relationship like you do have now in your story. Whatever. I just wanted to comment on that. Other than that, it is still a decent story.