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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, WHY HAVEN'T I READ THIS STORY IN SO LONG!?!?!?!?!?! First of all...
“Exactly what you think I’m saying! That you’ve been around the block so much you can’t find your way home anymore!”
THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST LINE I HAVE EVER HEARD! If you don't mind, I'm going to use that line on a few bitchy girls I know that resemble Ino! Man, a married guy...? Poor Chouji...It must be hard to look upon the woman he likes and see she's...well, easy. And TenTen, GO GIRL! I LOVE your verison of her! Hiashi, you bastard, how can you do that to her?!?!?! And Kiba...WHOA. He's got his fangs bared.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
“Exactly what you think I’m saying! That you’ve been around the block so much you can’t find your way home anymore!”
THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST LINE I HAVE EVER HEARD! If you don't mind, I'm going to use that line on a few bitchy girls I know that resemble Ino! Man, a married guy...? Poor Chouji...It must be hard to look upon the woman he likes and see she's...well, easy. And TenTen, GO GIRL! I LOVE your verison of her! Hiashi, you bastard, how can you do that to her?!?!?! And Kiba...WHOA. He's got his fangs bared.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! Contant updates are back!! =^^=
I love this story and always enjoy a good Hinata/Naruto pairing. I hope Naruto is able to claim Hinata as his own for keeps.
Keep up the great work! ^^
I love this story and always enjoy a good Hinata/Naruto pairing. I hope Naruto is able to claim Hinata as his own for keeps.
Keep up the great work! ^^
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no hinata having sex with another guy and or marring another guy.
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, the bit of plot development was nice, but the chapter lacked body, seemed unfinished, and rushed. hopefully next chapter will have more closure. at the rate you're going, however, it seems this story will be longer unless you make the next chapters a LOT longer than this one. on a happier note, it was nice to read about hinata's unheardconfession. poor girl. :-(
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They're slowly growing closer, between their behavior at the bar, the dropping of "-chan," and Naruto's request at the end. Kiba's going to be a problem, but I'm sure Hinata can deal with it. If she can't, her female companions will no doubt take care of it. Thanks for the update; I'll be eagerly awaiting the next one!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is one evil place to finish that chapter but I guess It's okay. we'll see what happens next.
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoed the update. Thanks for sharing you talents with us!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have three things to say! 1. I like the idea of Ino and Choji (Choji is my second favorite guy in the show) honestly alot of people think he's lazy and worthless but he's pretty awesome you know? 2. It's nice that Hinata got her answer without having to ask, you know Naruto NEEDING her to stay the night, some guys and girls have trouble expressing there feelings 3. I hope Naruto and Hinata help Choji and Ino I just love the idea of them helping there friends, and I know Choji still loves Ino even if he heard of her past exploits. To paraprase "She's been around the block enough times she doesn't know how to get home, until someone leads her back. Which is sometimes true for some of us. Now that I have that off my chest I just got to say is: PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN AS POSSIBLE!!! I don't care how long it takes just please keep updating and finish this great story, I would hate to see it go stale, so please keep up the great work!!!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far, this FF Rocks! Keep writing, I'm actually enjoying the drama you've put into it. What will happen after they finish? I don't even know. LOL
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit confused about what Hinata is doing. She has Naruto where she has always wanted, and she isn't sealing the deal. Still, it's a good fic.