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AHHHHHHH!!!! Fantastically intense chapter!!! OMG OMG OMG!!!



You need to update this again. Like seriously. I need more.
Your story is like crack, its so good.

Keep up the awesome work!

It was my pleasure.

Why isn't there anymore!? this is a great fic! I cant wait for an update

lol naru is such a loser xD poor gaara! i hope everything turns out well! =3 hope u update soon! =D

I do hope you write more though. I was really getting into this fic.

So I'm not trying to rush you but at the same time I am. I'm itching for the next chapter... *sigh* I hope it is coming soon I'm all kinds of excited for it. (I keep rating it at +++++ ^^") I'm bad I know but I want more people to read it and review it. Well I await you're next chapter.

~Zim

Okay now that I'm not screeching like a fan girl... ^^" I'll give you a real review. First Chapter: At first I thought for a hot second that Naruto already knew he liked Gaara. And the way he tried to escape Hokage duty all the time.. lol. And Gaara, the image you gave me drool worthy really.(Even though it was with someone who wasn't Naruto.) The mean things that Naru said to Gaara... I think fit very well the blond idiot..*rolls eyes.* He is so dense. The way that the other delegates are all like holy shit wtf? I like that too. Second Chapter: Gaara's interaction with the kids is great and some of the phrases you used to describe the moments with the kids, so dead on.(I have one of my own it freaking made me laugh so hard.) The way Gaara has to do something to try not to think but he ends up doing it anyway. I was like Nyu~ Gaara Naruto's an idiot! I like that the other Kages of the other nations are like we have to stop them from fighting. Chapter Three: What is there to say... I loved the whole thing. The fight was spectacular. And I died laughing, even though I probably shouldn't have been, when Gaara imitated Naru. Yeah... I think that's the best chapter so far. The dejection that Naru feels after what he did sinks in.. wow. I think that it's so in character. Gaara freaking out on Naru, I think it was great and something that Gaara would do as well. I love this story so much. I hope you update soon. I'm seriously stuck on the edge of my seat awaiting the next chapter. And well I went back through ever chapter and rated this at a +++++. And well I've told all my friends and linked them to it. It's that good. *bows to your writing awesome-ness.*

PLease finish.... more please.... I want to know what happens.... So bad.... *sobs* PLEASE!!!!! I want to pets them!! And like conk them on the head!! *screams* You must finish I'm dying to know!! *spazes out.*

I love this sooooo much please please I beg you to update as soon as you can. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Yes, a horribly ending sequel would KILL me! Don't do it! Don't, don't, don't, don', don't! Please! Ack, I almost don't want to read this anymore thinking it'll all end in tears. It's childish and immature of me, but I HATE sad endings, and since I'm really enjoying this fic, please do not ruin it for me by endings things poorly. Please.