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August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grammar: learn it.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story has definitely started off amusing, i like it. you could use a little bit of editing... *Pokes at story* if you care, lemme know, i can point out a few things. if not, that's ok! looking forward to next chapter!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!