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Dude, I totally didn't see the whole Sai-poofing-into-Naruto thing coming. I'm sure that's silly but...whoa.

I love the story, and I can't wait for you update, though hopefully Gaara-chan will be in the next one. W00t!

AH, love this chapter. I really like how you are handling the political issues associated with the different ninja villages.

I don't know if Sasuke is fearful of Gaara or jealous. O_O


This was a highly entertaining chapter. Also very well done. I loved the balance of it all.
Keep up the excellent work! ^^

My oh my, But this story gets better and better as chapters go by (and it started pretty smashing)

Where to begin? your story is so filled with awesome... okay, first, the characterisation: I absolutely LOVE how everyone is in this story (and for an author to inspire that SYMPATHY in each of her chara is no easy feast) Sai, shikamaru, hanabi, even sasuke... loves them all. (and I totally heart the otokage!sasuke theory too, if only because it removes him permanently from konoha without killing him). I also love how naruto is a less than idealistic hokage... now how I envisionned him, but how you write him it makes more sense.

Then, the writing style. SO GREAT! not only the story flows very well, but each of your paragraph is littered with little gems of cuteness, cleverness or humor. I love how you can write 'serious' and 'emotions' while still keeping a humorous tone... I SO wish I could write that well!

My favorite parts? As I said, there are so many throughout the whole story... But I must admit I really like the puching ball part... ABSOLUTE FAV being, of course, the 'Heat' part with Gaara... XDDD so funny. I'm thinking about writing a GaaraxNarutoxKyuubi, so the part with kyubi howling with laughter in naruto's head had filled me with joy, as well as naruto's innocence about the whole thing. GAARA IS SOOO CUTE (but nicely agressive too... I so wish I could have witness the past 'catfight' with sasuke, hee.) *insert fangirl squeak* There still some nice sexual waves between him and naruto...

Best line ever? "Ramen could be eaten, but murder last forever" XDDD

Okay now I wait eagerly for the next part of that awesome story... (update in a week? *squee*)

I haven't laughed this much in ages! I just found this and read the whole thing in, like, twenty minutes it's so good!

I love the fact that Lee's enjoying kicking the crap outta Gaara.

Waiting patiently for next update!

Ja!

Wow O__O great story XDD ah there is actually a plot *squee* lol sorry but this story is addictive so well written :D And even tough you had and angst Naruto in the beginning of the chapters I still loved him like that *-* realizing that the one thing he wanted the most was slowly draining him of what he was o.o so beautiful *sigh* and Gaara ahh XDD Gaara I just love him here Well hope to see and update soon :)

I really love where this story is going. Please update soon!

Im loving this. Please update a.s.a.p

I'm excited to learn what kind of hidden power Hiraku is harboring. I love when people don't know what they can do. I love drunk Naruto. I could see him being that kind of drunk. I think it's funny that Gaara gets him drunk on purpose. :) I mean, obviously he can't get Naruto to act the way he wants without it, but I still find it amusing. Can't wait for more story.

aw, I forget how funny the bit with the icecream was! the ultimate defense reacting to brainfreeze, wee (and is it just my pervy mind, or is this scene real sexy?)! And I like how Naruto seems to look -physically- at Gaara... unknown UST for sure!

And I love how Gaara boozed Naruto... and that the Hokage is the affectionate kind of drunk! and the blush...ah, the blush!

*isn't there a friggin way to have update alert here on AFFnet?*