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for You were the one behind the mask

by FaithVandom

schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kiba so got what he deserved, no one calls gaara-kun a freak and gets away with it!
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!

I love it. Sasuke and Kiba finally went to far. The pushed and pushed and prodded and finally the tanuki showed his teeth. >:)
Naruto's now in an awkward situation. I can't wait to find out what he says to Gaara. ^^ (Sasuke is going to be sooo jealous!)
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far so good, i like where this is going plus any fic that makes sasuke look like the prick he is is always a plus in my eyes, kep up the work i look forward to reading updates
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't like this story.



I love it! :D Heh, I'd love to see how Naruto and Gaara get together in this. Personally, I loved the high school dynamic you've set up and the pairings of friends found within it. Sasuke, as always, is an ass. While I don't quite see him as a trickster, I can picture him having a malicious sense of humor at other people's expense. I hope Naruto gets his picture back from the now dejected Gaara. I'm also wanting to know more about the connection Naruto feels with the image (and whither or not he's get a follow up Kyuubi picture to go along with it. ^^) I imagine that there will be more to Naruto's character then just his cheery facade. I can't wait to see Gaara tap into it as we see the two of them get together and find some sort of mutual understanding that brings them close. Right now we only see the light-hearted and moronic exterior that we all know Naruto uses to shield against his pain and while he may be naturally like that in times of happiness too, I can only imagine there is a reason he connects with an image of destruction such as the one Gaara painted in art class. This story may be very AU but it has some interesting elements in and I can't wait to read more.

Keep up the great work.
person ednama
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember seeing this on FFnet... it's a nice story (unfinished, no?) I'd like to see more of it!

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