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by Sylvir

person sasuke'sluver17
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Plz update soon because i adore your story! well, ttfn ;-)
person K
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just to answer a question, yes, in Japan High School students are not allowed to drive cars or motor bikes/scooters. Bicycles and trains are their main means of transportation.
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow
i love this story, i just read all the cappies so far and i love what youve done.
what a naughty boy gaara is and lol, is temari and gaara realated in this fic?
aww hinata should have someone.
great stroy and i really like your characterizations,
thanks and updae soon
person zanax
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... Why did Sasuke faint?

Was he raped before?

I wonder...

Update soon!
person Dragon7
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! That was a really good chapter!!!
Isn't Sasuke going to be in like... Mega trouble when Itachi finds out? Like really mega trouble... I hope you explain about the fainting by the way...
It' kind of... Mysterious...
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter, more Gaara, a few more explanations... And a chapter basically.
Update soon!

XD LANE
person Aikotina
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
waa! i love your story! its so cute! and i think i can guess what happened to sasuke when he was in... a foster home? yeah; also, me too! i'm right handed but i also wear my watch on my right hand. i also wear it upside-down so that the face of the watch is on the underside of my wrist. i'm weird. haha.
person qwerty
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shizune is pretty complacent as a school nurse.
person mrwonderwall
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you GOD that there is SOMEONE that made Sasuke the "girly" shy one
thank you

(but the dialoge can sometimes be a little lame :( )
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I like the protective big bro. idea. Well, not that it does Sasuke any good, but I never read a story with him being overprotective like this (and apparently not wanting his little bro) so it's a really nice change, and I want to see how this turns out.
Gaara after Naruto? Kind of strange, but I like the idea.
Poor Sasuke though... Gaara's being very mean, doing what he did. I hope for Sasuke that Itachi doesn't notice...
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, so I hope you update soon.

XD LANE

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