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thanx for the update. i don't have membership here so my reviews' name tend to change
anyho i've been reading this and waiting for it patiently.
i really love this fic and happy that you do plan to finish it
my my angst is coming (T^T) so i'll just enjoy this happy moment when it last ne
thanx (ooohhh can't wait for the next chappie

Wow! After ages of not visiting adultfanfiction.net, I finally stumble upon another fic that makes me want to return to this site and check upon it daily! I loved a lot of things about this fic.. It's well-written, it's engaging, and I really like how you portrayed over-protective Itachi. His overprotective-ness can be really over the top at times and I think this matches well with canon!Itachi who think he's doing the right thing but is actually pretty screwed up. I can't wait for the NaruSasu moments, so looking forward to the next update! Btw, do you post at any other sites besides AFF?

Ooh!! I can't wait for the First KISS XDD!!! <3

Oooh, this is good. very nice indeed.

Well-written, fluid and most important of all, interesting. I love the references and notes to Japanese culture you use. And that you use it in the story, not just... uh... you know, like someone trying to prove to everyone else how knowledgeable they are.

yay XD

Hi!!! Im new to the story, but Im already in love!!! ^^ The artistic and creativeness is refreshing and a different spin on the Naru/Sasu pairing. There are minor spelling and grammer errors but I dont remember where they are and they can sooo be over looked because the plot is amazing. I cant wait to see more and I never thought i would hate tax season... That goes to show how great and awesome this story is. lol. I'll be waiting with baited breath until the next chapter, until then...

Thank you so much for updating your wonderful story during such a busy time. Please continue to update when convenient for you.

(~sqeee) you don't know how happy you make me just by updating this awesome fic.
i really i mean reaaallly love it
just can't wait for their first kiss!!!
oh how i love NaruSasu
thanxx

I like this story! I like what you are doing with it. So far, I suspecting the disturbing issues of "uke and seme" will be settled. But, for me, since Naruto is so willing to do things for Sasuke, NO it doesn't make him "uke'. I think that both characters, in general, are both the uke and seme. I just don't want to read a story when one character is soooooo set on the uke and the other seme. Both fight for dominance and a relationship is give and take, and that is how I see Naruto and Sasuke--both are the uke and seme.

((( “I had a taste of him when I cornered him in the bathroom. The inside of his mouth is so warm even if that beautiful body is so cold.” The red haired boy had enough sense to pull away before Naruto could throw him off.

“I hope it was good because you are never touching him again!")))___Naruto suspected Gaara did something more than just bully Sasuke, and he was gonna hit him. Now Naruto has confirmation from Gaara himself that he cornered Sasuke and forced at least a kiss on him. Naruto is now emotionally attached to Sasuke and feels protective__yet Naruto still didn't hit Gaara. Even after seeing how what Gaara did to Sasuke affected him-the panic attack, the lost look. Did you just forget that you had wrote that Naruto was going to hit Gaara? I thought it was a nice touch having Sasuke make Naruto a bento. Naruto's reaction and how he looks at Sasuke as more than just a sexual conquest is nice also. Don't quite know why you're giving away future plot in your chapter end notes-takes some of the fun of discovery away.Your version of Sasuke's character is quite different from others I've read_but that's part of the appeal. It's nice to see different outcomes and possibilities with the change in the character's personality. Your story continues to entertain-thanks for sharing it.