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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the beginning. I always thought Haku needed more screentime than the few episodes he got in canon. Shame he`s a male here though (Naruto/femHaku is made of pure win, ...sometimes). I hope you`ll go for another ,notmainstream, pairing though, `cause there are way to much (bad) Naru/Hina and Naru/Saku fics that suck ass.
What suprised me in a positive way was the lack ofspelling mistakes, there were a few, but nothing major that made reading the story unpleasant, so keep up your writing niveau and update soon, I`m defenitely looking forward to it.
What suprised me in a positive way was the lack ofspelling mistakes, there were a few, but nothing major that made reading the story unpleasant, so keep up your writing niveau and update soon, I`m defenitely looking forward to it.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty cool
want to know what happen next
Dame Loli
want to know what happen next
Dame Loli