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I like it.

i absolutely loved this chappy x3 can't wait to see the next ^-^

ah poor naru!

It's very cute. I'm not sure if I reviewed the last time I read this... but I find that it's a quite unique plot line in the Naruto fandom. Thanks! Can't wait (but will) for the next update!
-smelly

Loving it!!!!!

Thank you.

man, this fic just keeps getting better! how do you do it? the details are just awesome ... i mean, i was riveted and sad it ended! thanks so much for sharing this!

Aaahhh!!!! What a great and long chappie! THANK YOU!! It was so much fun going through each day with little Naru-chan. He's the sweetest little thing ever! I felt horrible about what happened to him in the end. That villager wil def pay for that. Can't wait to read more! :D

Not a bad chapter, BUT you should definitely look over it or have a beta look over it because there are a lot of mistakes in it. It's a bit distracting because I find myself correcting in my head and I lose the story. Also can I say, I'm finding myself very worried about this Sukora character. She's screaming Mary Sue to me and those who no place in any story that's not written as a joke (There's actually a pretty good test someone wrote up to see if your OC is a Mary Sue or not: http://www.narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=4959. I'd definitely check it out) . Now she's leaving her village, does that mean she'll be settling in Konoha? With the extreme Mary Sue vibes I'm getting, I just can't imagine that being a good thing.

lol. cute

I love your story so far, and I will recomend it to others. I hate to say it but I dont review stories often, however Its very impressive that this is your first story. I just wanted to say thank you and I look forward to seeing more of this story soon.

Loki