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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn better and better
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes naruto, they do. can't wait to see what sas has in store for naruto!! *excited*
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. Funny, interesting, tasteful smut and enjoyable to read. I totally loved ch. 11. Especially, Kakashi's conversation with Sasuke. It somehow described Sasuke in a very dark compassionate way and showed him as the submissive yet more mature person than Naruto.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha kakashi kills me. i liked his advice to sasuke. Naruto's confused, you know what needs to be done sasu- baby. go get him!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This should have so many more reviews!! It's a fabulous fic!! I love how you keep them in character and yet keep the story so hot! Great work!! Keep it going!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, it's so in character to have Naruto so clueless and Sasuke so stubborn as to who they're in love with. You're writing this very realistically, I can't wait for the next chap!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* i love the image of itachi and naruto's father sharing sake and playing dice. i mean, it sounds just so... surreal, maybe? though it's amusing. they're prolly betting on who's going to get their head in gear first. oh, and i can't wait to see wht sasuke does to drive the point home. i'll be watching for updates!!
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor naruto has the hots for sasuke now, I love this story so far, i love how you try to keep true to their characters ^^
now we all know sasuke wants naruto just as badly, but he'll be damned before he ever admits it :P
i look forward to the upcoming chapters and possible lemons, you're good at writing lemons i loved the double team, that was so hot ^^
now we all know sasuke wants naruto just as badly, but he'll be damned before he ever admits it :P
i look forward to the upcoming chapters and possible lemons, you're good at writing lemons i loved the double team, that was so hot ^^
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaww not exactly what i was hoping for but still good, funny :)
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the hottest lemons I have ever read... great job, I'm still drooling!
Any chance you could share the site you mentioned? (the one you talked about at the end of chapter 3 that described 'going to church')
Any chance you could share the site you mentioned? (the one you talked about at the end of chapter 3 that described 'going to church')