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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderfully well written as everything you ever do is.
i love the characterization, the way you make sasuke come alive in this story. he's completely devoted to his family, which is something i would imagine him being. i like the way he devotes himself, the way he makes himself available for his family. and i really love that itachi does his best to help sasuke, while still maintaining his corporation.
it'll be interesting to see where you take this, how you bring naruto into sasuke's life (although i have a feeling it would have to do with iruka becoming a teacher in the twins classroom, ne?) it'll be wonderful to watch the story progress and its nice to see all the characters coming together. it looks to be another interesting story! keep it up!
*loves*
i love the characterization, the way you make sasuke come alive in this story. he's completely devoted to his family, which is something i would imagine him being. i like the way he devotes himself, the way he makes himself available for his family. and i really love that itachi does his best to help sasuke, while still maintaining his corporation.
it'll be interesting to see where you take this, how you bring naruto into sasuke's life (although i have a feeling it would have to do with iruka becoming a teacher in the twins classroom, ne?) it'll be wonderful to watch the story progress and its nice to see all the characters coming together. it looks to be another interesting story! keep it up!
*loves*