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schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*carts you off to the altar* ^_^ Anally shy Shika is just too cute!
person CkA
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of my favorite stories. Faster updates pleas (begging here) if possible for you. Thanks!
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to hear Neji use the word 'fuck'.

Sexy!
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
apparantly, neji's a genius and so is everyone else that reads this story...

"Word?

Neji’s brain finally caught up
[with him]"

i dont get it....

but other than that, this story is great and u had me waiting for forever for an update...

please update more sooner

*CHIBI Sango offers cookies as bribe*
person LadyWolf
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so love this fic !!!! I love Neji/Shika fics any way!!!

HOpe you post soon and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to what you/Neji has planned in the next chap, and thanks again for the heads up
person audreytiphaine
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

I love this story of yours, it's really well-crafted, and the reader can tell that you went to a lot of trouble researching your material before writing... or at least that you really know what you're talking about. This being said, i'm a little confused : it seems that Neji cares quite a bit about Shikamaru, however, it also seems that he is only interested in being his 'Dominant'. Yes, only to Shikamaru's submissive, but... actually, i'm having trouble verbalising what i don't understand about the relationship. maybe my question is 'IS it a relationship?'. and also... why does he have to plan scenes so much? why can't it ever be spontaneous and simply mutually pleasing like it was that time right before the contract? (like improv, but with the contract). I am really just asking questions, and not questioning your decision to write the story the way you do, because I'm ENJOYING the story the way you write it. Immensely. I just want to understand it better.
thanks for your time if you have it, if not, well I'm sure I'll find my answers in the next much-anticipated chapter!
audrey
person PrplGrl
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice and deep again.
Man, I think my head's gonna explode with all the information on D/s your giving.
Ahh, crap! Now I've got to think!!
Nooo!
Anyways, nicely written once more; I did read the previous chapter when it had come out, but was too lazy to review it at the time. >.<
But hey, I'm reviewing now and I can't wait until the "Hyuuga Poker Night!" Sounds like a lot of fun!!
Keep up the good work!
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I especially enjoyed what Iruka told Neji about his team and the rookie nine, that was cool.

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