rate_review Reviews

Awesome chapter. I love the pacing of this story.
Keep going!

Beautiful update

Damn...that was hot as hell, and nothing really happened...even though the chapter was an important part of the story! I laughed when Neji was silently praising Iruka and his books. I loved it! I look forward to readind more of this, I'm such a sucker for dirty talk and damn Neji's got a mouth! Please update soon, and congrats on the baby!

OMG!!! That was an INCREDIBLE chapter! You had me at the edge of my seat the WHOLE time! So ENTICING and SENSUAL! GOD that was EVERYTHING and they haven't even had sex YET! It takes a true writer to do that and you did it very well!! Once again AMAZING job!! I seriously CAN'T WAIT till the next chapter!!
OH and CONGRATULATIONS on the baby and the wedding! It must be such an INCREDIBLE time in your life right now! I'm so glad you had a great time in China and Japan! Well I bid you ADIEU till the next chapter! Please don't make me wait so long! ^ - ^
Love teddybomber!

I truly LOVE this fic! It's really great and descriptive I feel all their emotions and understand them completely. Thanks for writing it, one of the best fics I've read pertaining to this pairing. Oh! And I hope you enjoy your trip to China and Japan, I'm sure it will be filled with great and unforgettable memories!! BTW I would really appreciate it if you could E-mail me once you have posted your next chapter. I'm really excited to read what's next. Thanks so much and I wish you a wonderful trip filled with adventure!! ^-^ Bye Bye!

I haven't read this pairing before, and I found the premise very interesting, some of the scenes made me shudder, you are a very good writer. Could you please keep me updated on this and any other work you post? email: mbiba97@yahoo.com

Have fun in China and Japan!

Damn lucky! Happy New Year! Go check out a shrine for the new year, that'll be so cool.

So sexy! Can't wait for more of this awesome story! I was wondering if you could add me to the list of ppl you send e-mail update notifications to? My e-mail address is kaycedeann@yahoo.com I plan on continuing with this story, it is so good. Shikamaru is so vulnerable, and Neji is worried about being a bad dominant. I can't wait to see how Shika responds!

Peace-Love-Yaoi

Yay!
A new chapter!
I won't be one of those who bug you about taking so long.
Life can be very busy and unfortunately get in the way of writing.
But good job nonetheless.
I do look forward to the next installment and the dirty talk that will obviously be coming! ;)
Keep up the good--
Ooo! Shiny!