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for It Ends Tonight

by LydiaEddins

person Orochina
schedule July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm Oroby. I've read this fic of yours some time ago, and wanted to review it along with the other fics of yours, but I still have to read the rest (that's quite usual of me)..

Well, I really liked Gai as uke! I have to say I'd never suppose you to choose that role for him, and it was so unusual and interesting! I loved also the description of the different way of loving (Iruka's, Gai's, Yamato's). Iruka's character was very very well done as well, I loved that affection of his about his bed.
The same for Yamato: so well made! If I think that I still haven't understood his personality very much... while you made a wonderful work!

I was only a bit surprised that Iruka wanted to take Yamato back after having prooved that other delicious lover... ;)
person RyuEarth
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was really good! i'm glad that i decided to read this! =)
although, i do wish that yamato and gai stayed together, that would have been strangly cute! ^^
(and no, it's not just because i'm an avid kakairu fan either) ^^;;
person mihoshi
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until you update. This is great. I would have never thought of a Yamato/Gai pairing until I read this.
person mihoshi
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love ti that you don't take forever to update. I absolutely love it. Poor Gai and Yamato. I hope they find love in each other.
person charmpit
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Angsty.
person charmpit
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, now you've got my attention.
person charmpit
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like YamaIru. You should consider an additional fic of that pairing.

Providing Iruka isn't cheating with Kakashi in that one, that is.

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