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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please continue this story, very interested to see what happens next ^_^
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was nice. Pretty good. Keep it up!
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, that was hot. I love kyuubi-Naruto moments where he's all dominant alpha-male and growly. In fact, I love your writing all together -- give me more alpha-male smut. Please?
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was definitely hot and I have to say that I really like your style. I think you could leave the story as is and it would be fine but I think you could make this a really great story, even if it is all about the smut, with a few more chapters. I would at least like to know what happens when they wake up.
Great work and good luck.
Great work and good luck.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue it. Definitely continue it.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was so freakin awesome and hot. You should totally continue this.
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, make more! I'm such a NaruSaku slut! (more of a ShinoSaku slut, but still!) It was hot. I had to excuse myself for a moment....(>x<)
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A tip, I'd really advise against ending a chapter halfway through a little sex scene. It kills the mood, and especially for people who have to wait until the next chapter, you'd have to warm 'em up again.
You can end a chapter like that, but only if something happens before that (ie. someone walks in), or something of that nature.
You can end a chapter like that, but only if something happens before that (ie. someone walks in), or something of that nature.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
reading this before going to work was a VERY bad idea for me........oh man NOW i NEED hubby to cum to me!!!
keep going! i want some more!
laters! ~_^
keep going! i want some more!
laters! ~_^
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start. Please continue.