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schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I only have one complaint about this fic. I hate that Naruto forgave her so easily, I have been cheated on and you don't bounce back from something like that so quickly. Maybe he should have taken more time to heal. I dunno, some ppl might feel just the opposite. Other than that I really like how you used the lyrics in the story, good job. I would give you a 7 out of 10 on this fic.

=D Peace-Love-Yaoi
person sarge
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the story although can you redo it to make the sex scene more graphic and could you also make it a little longer
person sarge
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and like you mentioned can you also do the reverse one were sakura cheats on sasuke with naruto. tnx
person XFactor
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I mean no disrespect when I say this, but you could've done a lot better, especially seeing as how you've had some success previously, standards are a bit higher.

When I saw this and read the summary I was intrigued, and you did alright, but again, it could've been a lot, lot better.

Regardless, you still did an alright job.
person numba1yaoigrl
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was just...Wow so amazing i loved it so much.

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