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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't even begin to describe how many times I've reread this thing. Probably cuz it's what I turn to if I ever need any sort of inspiration. As much as this is a terrible way of putting it, bitchin' story. Characterization is beautiful, and the length of the chapters is actually very good. Very...filled without ever being overbearing. Well, I'm rambling like a fool.
TL;DR - Awesome story; update soon
TL;DR - Awesome story; update soon
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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Ino walked in why they were 'playing.'
I loved it poor guys they can't catch a break. Update soon?
I loved it poor guys they can't catch a break. Update soon?
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW!!! I've been waiting for this forever..wonderful job you've been keeping me on the edge of my seat since chapter 1. Keep up the GREAT work!
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!!! Your the best... I love this story and I was hoping that maybe they would actually hook up... but alas, foiled by the Pig... Can't wait to see more
Hugs
Alpine ^_^
Hugs
Alpine ^_^
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dkjfa;slkdjffasljgf;askljnas;ls;lgk ja!!!!!!
Sakura-Kakashi-both-GUH!!!
................ *goes to hunt Ino down to skewer her like the smut-interrupting pig she is*
P.S. Pakkun and Kakashi are fucking CUTE. Badass shinobi or not, he luvs his puppies!
Sakura-Kakashi-both-GUH!!!
................ *goes to hunt Ino down to skewer her like the smut-interrupting pig she is*
P.S. Pakkun and Kakashi are fucking CUTE. Badass shinobi or not, he luvs his puppies!
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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, this is amazing 0___0 I read 23 chapters of this stuff in just over a week (which is a record for me)! Thank you so much for writing such a good story, which has both interesting development of character AND plot and is also written in some of the most exquisite language I've come across in this genre. In fact, I got so caught up in the fanfic that it inspired me to finish writing a song I had problems with for months, so I'm going to officially dedicate it to the KakaSaku pairing. Feel free to contact me via e-mail if you're interested in the lyrics =)
There also might be some fanart coming your way to illustrate "Double Edged", so you'll probably hear from me again after the next installment (::wink::)
Once again, thank you and good luck with this story. Ja!
- BlackButterfly.
There also might be some fanart coming your way to illustrate "Double Edged", so you'll probably hear from me again after the next installment (::wink::)
Once again, thank you and good luck with this story. Ja!
- BlackButterfly.
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January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg...you wrote Gai so well....congratulations....i am so loving this!!!!
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dang that pug has him wraped around is little paw lol then again so dose some one else lol
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It's not all sex and violence but it has a nice dose of both that adds some tension and spice to the mix. Your timing for humor is wonderful and the characters are well developed from outside of the manga or TV shows. All in all I'll pretty much read whatever you provide! I am looking forward to the next chapter!