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by nimblnymph

person kuro
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hi,
i stumbled across this on the internet and it immediatly reminded me of your fanfic! =D

http://www.sodahead.com/fun/who-is-the-best-for-sakura/question-773481/?link=ibaf&imgurl=http://www.foroswebgratis.com/imagenes_foros/1/0/5/2/6/408697kakashi%2520x%2520sakura.jpg&q=sakura%2Bx%2Bkakashi

<3 keep up the good work
person kuro
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed at kakashi's actions* you are my hero <33
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YOUUPDATED!!!HG;AISBNTR;EJGWPQOEIJHBABBLE!

And naturally, I loved it. Pakkun and the dogs always get my vote. Kakashi's totally a 'love me, love my dogs' kinda guy. Even if he wouldn't necessarily say it upfront. I bet Pakkun would, though.

I liked the angsting Sakura went through about the books-though I can only imagine her reaction later if she'd found out one of them was a fake(I'm still amused by what might happen to Genma, when Kakashi finds out!)

And the sex? Do I really need to tell you how awesome that was? Truly? Okay then, IT WAS EFFIN' AWESOME! As always, I'm in awe of your abilities. And thank you for making the hymen breaking less of a . . . what's the word? Drama? Seriously, I've seen way too much of that, "full of purple prose and hyperbole," to quote yaoi_is_my_antidrug. I'll admit, I was a little worried after last chapter, when you took a bit of the 'oh, goodness, I'm touching myself, how dirty and guilty and on-so-ignorant of this natural bodily function I must be!' last chapter, but you've restored my faith. Thank you!

Plot? Check. Humor? Check. In-character. . . ness? Check. HOT porn? Check. Sound like a winner to me!

And the ending! OMG, SAKURA, NOT THE FACE! THE GORGEOUS, GORGEOUS FACE! *sobs*

...On the other hand, if he breaks his face beyond total repair, he might be imperfect enough to forgo the mask altogether... Sorta like when Fabio got smacked in the face with a bird, ya know?
person kuro
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading this fanfic for some time now, really like the story so far.

only thing im not too pleased with is the 'Dutch bill' part, since im dutch and were not all like that ^^;;
person Dreamie
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whew, you might not be happy with it, but I'm mighty pleased! Well done, and I hope to see more from you soon!
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOOT FINALLY!!!!!! Wow even I was starting to get sexually frustrated lol....Great job and I love the delivered smack at the end..knew it was coming. I missed you and I'm glad to see ya again this is one of THE BEST Saku/kakashi fics I've ever read!!! Keep up the great work I hope to see more again soon
person that'sjustit
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AT LAST!!! oh this chapter was ssssooooooooo good i completely blanked out reality. I'll defiantly be having dreams about this one. you get more than cookies for this, you get charlotte russe, and godiva truffles, and a strawberry kiwi torte with bulgarian cream <3
schedule May 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The end was pretty chuckle-worthy. As a guy, I can totally see reacting like that to her confession. When Genma admits to stealing the other one, well, I can guess the reaction on that one, too. Anyways, great seeing an update to the only story I've ever favourited. And one of the two I've left reviews for.
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I seriously don't think I'll ever get tired of rereading this story, no matter how many times I want to kill Fate for interrupting them, or someone's brain clicking on at the wrong moment. -_- In any case, I know whatever's coming will be worth the wait. Now if I could only say the same thing about Bitch Nights . . .
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing. Just wanted to let you know.

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