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for A Subtle Seducing

by Lisea18

schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the chapter! It was seriously awesome!!!
I mean, great Itachiness, awsome Juugo and Suigetsu!!! Love it all.
I was wondering how long you were going to make this story, considering you wanted to make it into a oneshot or something...
Well, can't wait for the next chapter.
The end of this one was PERFECT!!!
XD LANE
person Avonne
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far, I love the Sasuke/Itachi dynamic in this and that Naruto is such a relentless little stalker for his Bastard, lmao.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!
person MewMew2
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. I love the twist of Sasuke being a teacher and not a student. Btw, could you list ages in the next chapter? Thanks. Please update when you feel inspired to.
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great to see another chapter!! and I loved it! so smexy and hot.. and I love how sweet Itachi was, going to check Naruto's intentions and all... XD
person charmpit
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist to the tale. I can't wait until their ultimate encounter. Go with the buildup, though, it's working well.
person Tensai
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, I laughed my ass off reading this story)))XD
Can't wait for update))
person cally
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this!!!! can sasuke please be uke?! there is not enough sasuke uke stories out there!!
person maki
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so far. you're French aren't you? ^_______^ it's 'flood' in English not 'inundation' btw. and it's spelled 'inondation' anyway. if your spell-check says otherwise its cause your dictionary is probably set to 'English' when it's a French word.^-^
person Fayte
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I really like this story alot and you write really well to,
no over analysing or to much use of a name, it just flows!
I cant wait till Sasuke figures out its naruto lol
I can just imagine
Thanks for the Update, Keep up the good work!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I knew Sasuke liked it. I'm very gald we got a little insight on to what Sasuke's thinking. And Naruto is just so relentless!

I can't wait to see the second part of the plan. You english is written very nicely, a few mistakes here and there but who doesn't make mistakes? It's excellent.

Please update soon! Do you know how many chapters this will be?

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