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for Wind And Fire Part 2

by rxtechgirl

schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I`m sorry for nagging, and you shouldn`t apologize for the medeical terms, I think it is fascinating who you describe his problems and treatment, it gives a rather unusual insight into the world of Naruto. Well about Sasuke, I suppose you will kill him off, at least that is what your story codes could indicate. It will be interesting to see how everybody reacts, but please for god`s sake don`t let Sasuke die and then Sakura finds consolation in Itachi`s arms, that would be so cliché an would make Itachi completely OOC, even though in the recent manga chaps he seems to be a person with many ulterior motives and foresight. The chapter was very nice and the mystery who wants to kill off Sauke could provide us with a few thrilling moments so I urge you to continue with your story
person numba1yaoigrl
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love itasaku, i hope there is a lot more of it. good start cant wait for more
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG LUFF :3 I like this story so much! I cant wait for the next chapter. I like ShikaXTema, but...NOW YOU MAKES ME LIKE SakuXIta!
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. you`vè made it ery clear that you do not Sasuke (notice the different spelling!) But Itachi seems to me a bit too soft-hearted so far, on the other hand the beginnings of this story already seem to be promising. Please continue

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