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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOW could you leave it there?
ACK!
So funny. I love the mud-fight scene!
update!
ACK!
So funny. I love the mud-fight scene!
update!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok I love where this is goin, really I do, but for the love of cheese will you stop using "moon colored eyes" and the constant use of their last names so much. Its a smidgen annoying after a while. Im not raggin on you cuz I really do like this, its well-written in my opinion, just some constructive criticism from a faithful fan.
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grinning giddily from ear to ear* That was sooooo much fun to read ^_^ I had a crappy night but reading the third chapter made me smile again, so thanks for that! I hope you continue this story ASAP since I already love it to death ^^ Ohhh, and do I see a shower scene coming up?
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That mud fight was ridicuously adorable. I loved it.
I sense a soon-coming love confession. Or, at least a nice steamy kiss.
I sense a soon-coming love confession. Or, at least a nice steamy kiss.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for muddy foreplay!
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe!
Good chapter!
That muck war was funny.
Poor Neji and his hair. xD
It didn't seem to bother Shika though.
I hope Hiashi isn't going to see Neji like that when he goes home. xDD
IF he goes home. ;D
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I want to see what happens next!
Good chapter!
That muck war was funny.
Poor Neji and his hair. xD
It didn't seem to bother Shika though.
I hope Hiashi isn't going to see Neji like that when he goes home. xDD
IF he goes home. ;D
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I want to see what happens next!
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahaha, that's funny. And Shika's still not giving in. How are they going to get into that nice car all dirty like that? Hmmm, interesting. *goes off to finish laughing*
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aiyaaa, that was mean. Such a cliffhanger...*grmbl* I so hope you plan on continueing this. It's really good and a complete new idea for an AU. I like it very, very much...especially the dream was yummy *purr*!!!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im liking this, please update soon
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That limey dream was very sexy.
I loved Shikaku's teasing and Yoshino's nagging-Nara family moments always make me grin.
Please, update, so I can know what happens after that cliffhanger!
I loved Shikaku's teasing and Yoshino's nagging-Nara family moments always make me grin.
Please, update, so I can know what happens after that cliffhanger!