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You know, your actually hitting the exact thoughts that I have about Sasuke. As much of an ass as he acts, I think his reasons are to protect his team.

Keep up the good work!

I don;t know who is complaining, but this is perfect. Best EMO rant ever!

Nice!

I love it. I think I like this jealous Sasuke and I love his POV. Man Sakura is a lucky lucky girl. I hope Sasuke gets some lovin soon. Don't get me wrong though, I'm loving all the action going on.
Rox

funny! all i have to say is go kakashi! go sakura! go naruto!

Dearest Blackwidina,

For starters, I am have to say that I am most overjoyed that this chapter was updated! And even happier when I found out it had been dedicated to me. It was the first time for that and it makes me even happier to know that I made YOU happy.

But trust me girl, you made me LOTS happier with this one chapter.

Kakashi can bone me in a store any damn day. He could bone me in a closet for all I care! If I was Sakura I would have bought that T-shirt with teeth marks and hung it in my closet as a souvenir. My first public sex achievement; it’ll be like playing a Sim and getting that ‘First Public Sex’ memory.

Long live good sex.

I must say, when you did the view switch I was a little thrown off, but my brain quickly adapted to it and boy was I laughing from there on after. Sasuke is a hot fucking mess. When he got jealous over seeing first Sakura, then Naruto in the sketch book I just knew it was going to get good but I didn't expect this:
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He was staring at his right hand like he hadn't seen it before. I think it actually may have shocked him that he'd reacted so violently. Then his expression hardened, and I realized he didn't really care. "That, Duck-Butt, was what I believe is called a 'bitch-slap.'
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That right there was the SHIT. I was absolutely dying because I could so see Sai doing that! The cat fight right after was even more hilarious! With my imagination running wild I almost expected one of them to wail out-"NO, HE'S MY BABY DADDY!!"

That was delicious but nothing put the icing on the cake better than this line right here:
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What the? I glared at him, "You don't have any problem with the fact that they're both fucking that-this-him?!?"

Kakashi shrugged, "I am, too. So no."

I actually lost my Uchiha composure for a few moments as my jaw hit the floor.
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BOOYAH! Leave to Kakashi to deliver the blow to the balls! Not to mention that he and Sai were up to no good with Sasuke in the SAME DAMN HOUSE!!! I love it! Nothing like making the sharigan bleed green with envy!

Ive just read the first chapter and you already have me hooked :D Im giddy in anticipation for the rest. I love the way you easily summed up everything and personified the characters. The "bitch night" is a creative new scenario that I really like and I can really really feel the connections between that characters already. Wonderful chapter to get readers hooked, the last line was the nail in the coffin. ;)

2nd chaper YAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYAY that self richous bastard so got what was coming to him, I was cheering her on the entire time thank GOD Sakura you did it!!! FUCK YA! lol, BRILLIANT!

totally fan girl squeeessssssss!!!! I don't often find stories that have a good characterization of Sakura in it. I am happy with this one. I sat down and only had time to read the first two chappies but I was totally hooked. I just got off work and finished reading up to chappie 9 and I can not WAIT!!!!!!! to read more. I am so looking forward. I have been laughing so hard the entire time but I can totally see this story happening in my minds eye. Thank you so much for posting it and I look forward to more.

I really like the way this is going.

Please tell me you're planning on finishing this story?

/ When do you think your next update will be? / Will they be regular updates?