rate_review Reviews

oh congrats on the 10,00 marks! haha

im absolutely thrilled that this has a plot! What can I say...it gets boring if it's all just sex with no romance or plot.

But I have say that I'm not fond of the word emo very much -_- so reading the part about sasuke and his..emoness was rather strange...

But great chapter! Keeping messing with his head! It's so funny to see him suffer a bit haha

I can't wait to see when he finds out about them.

btw sai x sasuke sounds mighty hot. hahaha

i hope there will be some possible saisakusasu action in here.
it just sounds rather interesting and I don't think anyone wrote anything with those three together yet!

I so hope that Sasuke find a dom that can
teach him the correct way. I felt so sorry
for sasuke this last chapter and thought
sai was asking for it. Go Sasuke !! Although
he still need to make up for leaving team
7 and join them in their moresome.

i love your fanfic!<3thanks for uptading so soon after i'd found it:P
the plot is original and your writing style is great)))the unassuming characterization of everyone makes for smooth reading and the lemons are droolworthy!:)
sorry for any bad english,'s not my first language))
hoping for a further chapter soon,
nat<3

i love your fanfic! thanks for uptading so soon after i'd found it:P
the plot is original and your writing style is great)))the unassuming characterization of everyone makes for smooth reading and the lemons are droolworthy!:)
sorry for any bad english,'s not my first language))
hoping for a further chapter soon,
nat<3

HI!!!!!!!!!!

My comment to your rant (don't mind please):
All I ever wanted was a little more peeks of the boys going at each other (behind our backs or whatever) so that it wouldn't seem so Sakura-centered. You did this in this chapter and very well too! You gave peeks before but in my opinion it could have been a peek or too more to show us that they are all a happy bundle :D I never thought you there was a big imbalance just a slight... BUT you balanced this nicely in this chapter. And you showed the differences in their relationships with Sakura. :)

Your chapter:
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
This is soo great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy you updated! SQUUUUUEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLL
It's a pity Sakura wasn't there to see this! grin
And Sasuke is noticing Sai, ne!? lol
It looks like he is going to be part of the bundle????? I am finally hoping you will put him in this relationship----eventually :D So what happened to him..... hm?


AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Share more soon!! PLEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

I love your story, the plot is excellent. It's been awhile since I read anything this good for Naruto ^_^ I'm always checking to see if you updated, so please please please PLEASE!!!! Continue the story ^_^

Ch 3&4, OMG I think i forgot to breathe...

i fuckin luved it!!!

Ahahahahaahaaa.
Omfg, you keel me.
Seriously, my friend, humor is definitely your forte.
I loved the quikie in the clothing store and I love the mass confusion that is emanating from poor Sasuke.
Oh my dear, you are a talented little bee-otch, I hope you know.
Great work.

One of the things that I absolutely! love about your story is the personality you put into it and the natural humor, everything flows along perfectly.