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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good and the lemon was so hot! can't you make a sequel where ranmaru has grown up a few years and decides to find tenten and make her his girlfriend or something? loved the story lots, and don't want it to end :P
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. your did it quite well and i saw nothing wrong with it. good job
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness