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August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My heart. ;__; This was beautifully written.
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October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such sweet heartbreak. I luv this kind of stuff. <3
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September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very sad, and yet wonderfully beautiful. I loved both points of view. Well done! :D
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just beautiful. Wonderfully written and yes angsty could be an apt descriptor; but, I think hauntingly sad is better. The poeticism of the sadness and dialogue is wonderful. I knew from the beginning that he would have to actually be dead by the end, but like Tsunade was hoping, I was hoping that he truly wasn't--hoping for the miracle. Needless to say, I am a cheeseball and just loved this. T_T
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
0.0 that actually made me cry.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that after reading fanfics religiously over the last 6 months, this is truly one of the best that I have read... I cried and it is hard for me to do that after reading a story.. I really enjoyed it a lot... thanks so much for posting it.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story comes very close to the story line from the manga. beautifuly written and very angesty but i love it. the ending in this story, like the manga, has made me cry. it's not often that i give this kind of review. as most of you have noticed. this story really got to me..
keep going aya. you have a great story here that you can expan for a few chapters more.
keep going aya. you have a great story here that you can expan for a few chapters more.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it. I think this relaitonship isn't given the proper amount of dedication by us fans. Now, you've got me wanting to write a TsuJir one-shot. Maybe I will, after I finish my Konan piece...
Well done!
Well done!