rate_review Reviews

betweenj sputtering in giggle fits and face-redding hotness, you've made a hell of an awesome story.
Well done my good pervert, I tip my hat off to you. (and toss you a pair of wet panties in the process)

hahaha how funny, i loved your semi-sarcastic tone and I vote for a sequel!!

OMG, I absolutely loved this one. I very recently started reading all of your fics from beginning to end, and overall, this is my favorite. I laughed like mad the whole time. There's nothing I love more than a dash of humor in the middle of a smut scene. That, and I just kept imagining things from Hayate's point of view.

This was awesome, and I love the rest of the series as well; keep up the good work!

*HOWLS LAUGHING*
I love you madly. More on the wherefore and why (really just a fancy way of being redundant, that) over at That Other Site.

Also, there are a couple missing words- minor words, like "with" and "the" and "a." But I'm too lazy and too amused to point them out just now- if you care, poke me mercilessly later. <3

that was so great OMG I love it. These two characters done in your style are my favorite characters to read about. Thanks for the fun.

Loved the discussions of the dreams that they each had had, loved the humor, loved the sex and loved "lotion boy".

Wonderful story. Thanks for writing.