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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I like it. Kind of twisted in itself as Naruto watches his life being lived by his son/daughter. Absolutely love this idea. XD
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I would really like to read more, poor Naruto and his child. Keep up with the good work! Take care. Hugs
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that's sad. poor naru. i look foward to your next update.
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic start!!! Focus on this story ^_^ The emotions your evocating are very true to life. Hope Naruto can have a happy ending to this without giving up his child...update soon =)
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Pls. continue
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, it looks very interesting. I would love to read more and am looking forward to the next chapter!^_^
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the setup, but I hope by the time Naruto has the baby he can raise him or her...or maybe twins (one w/ black hair and one w/blonde hair perhaps) ^_^ Maybe Sasuke can find out he's pregnant and actually decide to have a family...just ideas. I like angst but this seems almost to have the makings to go either really sad and depressing or more hopeful and uplifting. I hope you choose the latter. Anyways, update soon can't wait to read the next chapter ;-)
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote FOCUS! Focus, focus, focus...
Hmmm... why are you reading this and not focusing?
Poor Naruto?! I don't want him to have to go his whole life without knowing his and Sasuke's child... So sad. I can't wait to see where you take it.
And yes... I see that you are STILL reading and not FOCUSING. Shame on you. Shame.
:)
Hmmm... why are you reading this and not focusing?
Poor Naruto?! I don't want him to have to go his whole life without knowing his and Sasuke's child... So sad. I can't wait to see where you take it.
And yes... I see that you are STILL reading and not FOCUSING. Shame on you. Shame.
:)
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's all Sasuke's fault! Damn him to hell! Naruto wouldn't be forced to give up his child, if it wasn't for Sasuke-teme!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Powerful stuff. I'm really impressed.
Can't wait for chapter two!
Can't wait for chapter two!