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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
pretty nice
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is a good story hope you up date soon good job :)
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I loved this chapter. I can't wait for the next one. This story actually has a believeable reason for Naruto to move on and improve himself without resorting to anything extreme. Its a nice change of pace to read and honestly, I think it makes for a better story. Great worK! Keep it up. ^^
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I rarely see Sakura as the bitch she is and it makes me smile. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOu are off to a great start. I cant wait to see where this goes.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved It! Like everything else i've read of yours ^^ Can't wait for the rest ^^
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice this first chapter was vary well done and I have to say the consecpt of this story has me interestid in seeing how this will work out.
Well I hope that you update soon, because I'll really like to see what will happen next chapter.
Well I hope that you update soon, because I'll really like to see what will happen next chapter.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good can't wait to see the next chapter
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Great character interactions, development is moving at the right pace. I like the interplay between Naruto and Sasuke too.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as you stated in the start, this will be a naruxtemari fic. so far you have outlined the changes he will go through. due to the fact that he is a ninjutsu aficianado, his taijutsu and genjutsu are weak by comparison. that is great. i was freaked hearing that he just gave up on sakura, but every fic i read can't just be about them. it is a fresh start and i can't wait to read more. write on my wayward author