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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. An intriguing new twist, to an overdone premise.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its cool its short though and can naruto get a herem ? plz?!?!?!?!?!?
oh and can you update me on your progress on this fic plz ?!?!!?!?!?!?!
oh and can you update me on your progress on this fic plz ?!?!!?!?!?!?!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! Please review soon, I'd like to see more of Naruto's self improvement!
~Aisuru
~Aisuru
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was well more like is a great story something different with a nice story
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start I'm REALLY INTERESTED to see how this will turn out, you should make naruto the NEW "green beast" but not with the jump suit, ten ten gave him 4 outfits one should be green cause that works with orange
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good, I mean that. But there's a problem... Only one chapter to read so far. Please fix that asap, hehe...
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it is good. But space out the events a little you know. I mean he just all these morning practices in one day
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To tell you the truth I found this story rather enlightening. I've never liked how Sakura always treated Naruto, and I think this is how he should have handled it. So far its a great story, and Im looking forward to more chapters.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this is the kind of story that this site needs more of. While not a lot of pervertedness there is a very good story. Please keep up the good work when ever you can.