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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey is a good story hopfor it e you update soon i have been waiting
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story. kind of waiting on the update though? really want to find out what happens next.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story.good development. please update soon.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this. The only issue I have is that it seems a bit rushed, but that's almost understandable considering the subject.
I'm looking forward to mre.
I'm looking forward to mre.
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May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i am soooooo looking forward to the next chappie!!!!!! please T.W. finish this one!!! i would love to see where this one goes to next!
laters! ~_^
laters! ~_^
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more i must have more!!!
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I like the direction this story is headed. Please don't let this story end up like alot of the good stories...unfinished. Please update!
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story please update soon.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to read more of this :)
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah dude, you gotta continue this, you should make this a multiple pairing Naruto x OC and Temari cause naruto should change most of his ways like peter parker from spider-man 3 and be come like a big pimp (and make hinata PASS-OUT instead of just fainting) so give me an email or two if you need ideas I could come up with some if you need any