rate_review Reviews

Lol, at Chouji, so cute! But really flour is so bland an unappealing I would have been like cske please! Lol, at Naruto and Sakura that "I just wanted to know what she smelled like” was too amusing.

So Sasuke finally pounces I was waiting to see how long he was going to hold out for.

And how is it that Iruka has all these pets and does not know what it means to be in 'heat?' And animals have natural instincts from my observation of my friends dogs they seem to tell when its that time so to speak. So how is it that they can't even tell Naruto's in heat?

I love this story. At first I thought it was a bit like the manga/anime Loveless, but it seems to be almost completely different. Which is good! Your characterizations are flawless, grammar is impeccable, and spelling errors are non-existent. (To my eye, at least.) Can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job!

Hmm...This is certainly interesting. I like how, rather than magically spoof Naru's ability to become pregnant, you made him a hermaphrodite. ^w^ Very nice. I'd like to be added to the mailing list... ^w^

changeling_zirra_nova@yahoo.com -->My E-mail. ^w^

Kitty smex? =o
xD

Oh oh! Me me me! Maisha-sama@msn.com

Nyaha. I'm totally loving this. x3

loved it!!! i hope you get a good grade on your report!!!! can't wait to read chapter 3!!!! keep up the great work!!!!

Awesome! I love humanoid pet stories!
This chapter was so good, I loved Sasuke's apprehension to Naruto as well as the smell and the last
bit of the chapter was heavenly =D

Waiting for more and I would like to be put on da mailing list please! This story is my new fix. =D

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-Emily

woohoo new chapter. thx

omgish so kawaii cant wait for the next chapter im hooked

Love this story! I'm postively gushing over it. I do like the "pet" type of story. I enjoy how you're building the plot and keeping the readers interest. Great job.

*high pithced, silent squeal of doom* Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! You did NOT just leave it there!! Damn it...now I'm going to have to check every day for an update! T-T Why...why are you doing this to me, why???

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